Philippines Roleplay-Family Application

[whitewilliams]

Family Name: Philippines Roleplay
Family Leader: White_Wiliams

Family Co-owner: Peter_Williams


Story: Fat Tony, who was a founder of Italian Mafia wanted to expand his power. So his sent his daughter Kate Wiliams to San Andreas so he would have more allies to fight his enemys. Three years affter Fat Tony sent his daughter to San Andreas the enemys attacked Italian Mafia HQ in Italy. They killed everybody. Luckly Fat Tony got away and he came to his daughter Kate. When Kate was twenty years old, Fat Tony died and Kate decided to join San Andreas sheriff department. But she couldn't forget his fathers past. So one day Kate decided to start Italian Mafia once again, so they could attack the enemys who once destroyed Italian Mafia. She couldn't do it alone, so she talked with her friend Bee Jackson to help her in her quest to rise Italian Mafia to it's former glory.

They started to look for a place that they can call home, and they raised enough money to buy Mafia HQ. One day Bee introduced his half-sister Jessica Albe to Kate. Bee told Kate that Jessica is a wealthy woman and she could help the Mafia to rise again. When they got their game-plan ready they started to recruit new members.





Family Set Ups (( OOC )):

Family Skins --

Rank 6 = ID 295

Rank 5 = ID 240

Rank 4 = ID 125

Rank 3 = ID 126

Rank 2 = ID 124

Rank 1 = ID 127

For girls = ID 216



Family Rank Names:

Rank 6 = The Hitman
Rank 5 = Boss
Rank 4 = Spy

Rank 3 = Driver

Rank 2 = Security

Rank 1 = Lavoratore

[Chris_Knight]

Ummm...I know I'm not the director or manager but heres a few tips ( Not being a asshole I actually like the family seriously ). 1. Re-write the topic. 2. Add more to the story..like what is your mafia all about or..why she wanted to bring the mafia back. Example: She couldn't go a day without thinking about completing her fathers legacy or goal.

3. You need a better family
name..Philippines Roleplay sounds like a server and not a family. Try something like Vercetti Crime Family or something.

4. And since your a mafia ( Good and well knowned for Rp family ) Your going to have to own businesses, A mansion fancy cars. So if you could add the cars you drive that would make it a lot better. I'm only trying to help you get accepted you don't have to do any of this.. Good luck on getting accepted.

-Chris_Knight